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posted by [personal profile] emperor at 04:00pm on 27/10/2005
Following on from discussion elsewhere...

[Poll #599388]

Edit: please answer based on your own understanding of what an not-Japanese-language Haiku is/should be. [livejournal.com profile] haiku_daily posts are generally in English, however.
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posted by [identity profile] 3c66b.livejournal.com at 03:09pm on 27/10/2005
Presumably one of the ways in which it's wrong is that `dimittis' is spelt thusly. I claim my 5 pedant points.
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posted by [personal profile] emperor at 03:11pm on 27/10/2005
Bother, you are indeed right, and I blame ETYOP, since I do know how it's spelt.
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posted by [identity profile] ewx.livejournal.com at 03:22pm on 27/10/2005
I think it's a rather long stretch to suggest something in Latin can possibly be an "English-language Haiku", though I don't think "cheating" is it.
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posted by [personal profile] emperor at 03:25pm on 27/10/2005
Err, yes. I should clarify that point.
 
posted by [identity profile] edith-the-hutt.livejournal.com at 03:39pm on 27/10/2005
Buh?
 
posted by [identity profile] hoiho.livejournal.com at 04:02pm on 27/10/2005
Could be senryu, rather than haiku...
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posted by [personal profile] emperor at 04:08pm on 27/10/2005
Is that what your comment meant? I can't read Japanese!
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posted by [personal profile] pm215 at 10:36pm on 27/10/2005

Suggest you have a look at the link to the haiku_daily website...

(not that I can read it either, since it's 300-year-old Japanese; nobody calls frogs 'kawazu' these days for a start.)

 
posted by [identity profile] tienelle.livejournal.com at 04:57pm on 27/10/2005
I expect there is a sung form in which this actually has the right number of syllables, but they're cheating too. And there are more requirements for a haiku than syllable count; I'm fairly sure some kind of reference to a season is one of them.
 
posted by [identity profile] hoiho.livejournal.com at 06:02pm on 27/10/2005
There are first approximation rules in [livejournal.com profile] haiku_daily's userinfo.

But a lot of what is called haiku is actually senryu, which has the same form, but fewer rules regarding content.


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posted by [personal profile] pm215 at 10:19pm on 27/10/2005
The thing about the syllable count rule is that counting syllables in Japanese is a million times easier than doing it in English...

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